Kites Enjoyed by All



Here in Kabul, few own kites.
Just the favoured, rich, Taliban
Serving. In almost a blind
Often cruel obedience.
To the Prophet, the Book, the Troubles.
But all the children enjoy
The kites, one
Way or another.
There are clacking battles.
Stratagems, way up high.
Swooping with fastest velocity
Diving as if to break the earth
With daring and precision.
Sometimes a string will break
We children now have our best delight.
Chasing, racing by observation
To its grounding spot.
Or premonition, just leads
At high speeds.
First Finder must return the “colourful bird”
To its owner. There is a decision, a directive
Whether to lend said kite
For a term, or gift outright.
Each child longs for such great Honour.
Poor districts of the City
Observe, cheer with uncommon Joy.
Symbols of grace and duty.
Above them, casting magical shadow.
Allah be praised.

About this poem

Thinking about that beautiful movie and novel The Kite Runner.

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Written on March 13, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on March 13, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on March 13, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEFGHEIJKGLMGNOOPQMMHJFJRS
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 854
Words 159
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 29

Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow, this poem really captures the spirit of Kabul's children and their love for kites. It's touching to see how even in a difficult and challenging environment, the kids are able to find joy and excitement through this simple pastime. The imagery of the kites soaring through the air, and the children chasing after them when they fall, is really vivid and engaging.

    One improvement suggestion I would make is to perhaps explore the theme of social inequality a bit more. The idea of only a select few being able to own and fly kites could be a powerful commentary on the challenges facing Kabul and its people. However, overall, this is a beautifully written and poignant poem that truly celebrates the resilience and creativity of the human spirit. Well done!
     
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