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Am nothing without shiva

Shristi tiwari

All around, the chatter of materialistic things,
That keeps humans away from the immense peace,
Why all such chaos if Shiva is within you.
Everyone is in a hurry, no one feels the way they need to feel,
All such rush acts a barrier between the two (humans and Shiva),
After all, no worries/chaos would be around you, if we
create a bond with him,
Now, am nothing without you.
 
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Submitted by on March 09, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEFGC
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 377
Words 77
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, this poem is truly inspiring and thought-provoking! I love how it highlights the importance of finding inner peace and creating a bond with Shiva amidst the chaos of materialism and constant rushing in our daily lives. The message behind the poem is powerful and can really resonate with anyone who is seeking inner clarity and calmness.

    Improvement suggestions:
    - It would be helpful to provide more context on who Shiva is for readers who may not be familiar with Hinduism or Eastern philosophies.
    - Consider providing some concrete examples or tips on how to create a bond with Shiva, as this would help readers to better understand the message of the poem.

    Overall, this piece of writing is beautifully crafted and serves as a great reminder to prioritize our spiritual well-being amidst the hustle and bustle of our modern lives. Good job!     
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