For my love when I am gone





 

Dear one I write you tonight

From a faraway land to say I love you

And I miss you more than words can say

Somewhere in the darkness I hear guns being fired

And I know someone is dying alone  

In a muddy field

I wonder if tomorrow

Will be my day to die

Late at night when I can’t sleep

I dream of home

Mother’s garden and your angel smile

My father waits to play checkers

And I can smell the turkey cooking in the kitchen

Darling, I want to be home

With those who love me

Not in a strange land

Filled with ghosts

These words are all I can give you

Please try to understand them

Promise me that if I am lost

In this war I never wanted to fight

You will find me

I want to lie beneath our lilac tree

Hear the birds singing

Feel the breeze whisper in the grass

I love you
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Written on February 27, 2023

Submitted by juliette.eide70 on February 27, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A B X X X X X X X C X X X C D X X B X X A D D X X B
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 826
Words 214
Stanzas 26
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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