A big mistake



As the sun set you are already awake
Trying to fight for your dreams but everything feels useless.
Some motivation to chill up
A few seconds then it's all gone
Back to your reckless world
Where you are the one that ruined it all


You wish you could breath your last breath
But the universe couldn't care less
You know you're worthless
But you bottle up and ignore the ache in your chest

Trying hard not to regret but you're the definition of a big mistake
Thinking that some time things will change but
All the devil tell you is that you will end up dead
Devil is not from hell
Look in the mirror you will see the devil it's self

About this poem

Hating your self, regrets, depression

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Written on February 11, 2023

Submitted by iganzekezaketia on February 11, 2023

Modified on March 20, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABXXXX XXBX AXXXX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 634
Words 129
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 4, 5

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