Your Presence

SamiBukhsh 1991 (Karachi)



Your Presence makes me happy,
Your absence takes my joy,

As a child becomes grumpy,
When he has lost his toy,

When you are in my sight,
My ayes are bright,

When you take permission,
I feel great hesitation,

When you wave your hand,
I feel to lose my land,

When you go out of sight,
My smile takes a flight.

About this poem

The poet talks about the presence of his love. He mentions how he feels when she says goodbye.

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Submitted by houseo.72468 on March 04, 2023

Modified on March 11, 2023

23 sec read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme AB AB CC DD EE CC
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 313
Words 77
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2

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