An endless lifemare

Sreenu R S 2000 (Kerala)

Ode


An endless lifemare

having a sudden born wake up
at the middle of the road
where the plural wheels trafficking
away the human minds along with them
a night without any rush
passing over me with a tide of fear
casing behind like an unknown enemies
roaming with the sharpen edge of torch beams
taking a little step ahead
they counter me with a white rays
and hiding their face from me
were my curiosity running out
through the darkness where the beams turnabout

A small flash of motorcycle came nearer
I ran as much eager
thrown myself soul dead away apart
But he smiles and stops before me
from the flash of his victorious smile
taken me to another end of darkest place

seeing a long harvesting wheels
jumps out with envy haste
to blow away the beating sense
by the time came near with as much speed
within a blink he left the other side and
waves with a swallowing smile that meant
where the unknown enemies and not even settled either
where to run and wither to end
never had desired for a wings to hold
to the gateway of a perfect paradise to fold

Now the unknown torchers seized me
to the midway by gathering a shape around with
all the white beams torches through my eyes
and bind my eyes tight without a movement
dive me to the immense peace
where my roots want to be settled
without any breeze to tease
suddenly eye borrows to a white land
where I was moving downwards like
drowning into a deep hole in a lake
now I shatters for a hand to uplift
a time echoes to hold the hands
of the torturing enemies
hands wants to nail a little more
as now I feel myself a little less
to the endless loop of escape

I see those white lands alone
with devils staring apart
where the wings has gone
when a man is near to lost
betray me, with a tearing silent peace
then I will grant you a heart of piece

About this poem

This poem is the conscious unconscious mind of a human race with lot of questions having an answer as the most torturing one. Here the man want to escape from life as he knows the real sense of life is just moving not a silent freeze of moments.

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Written on January 29, 2022

Submitted by shajij410 on January 29, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A XXXXXABXXXCDD AAECXX XXXXXXAXFF CXXXGXBXXXXXBAXX XEXXGG
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,798
Words 351
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 13, 6, 10, 16, 6

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