Ziklag

Doug Blair 1951 (London)



Pursuing Amalekites
With the image of their
Scorched village
Still fresh in their minds.
And angry, so angry
With the leader
Who had bade them depart from Ziklag.
Families left vulnerable.
Forgotten the times
Of his mastery,
His music,
His memories of
Meadow, stream and flock.
Of how he gathered them,
Some distressed, some in debt
Some discontented.
The trail and the camp
Had knit them.
He ever offering
Counsel and courage,
Just leadership,
Command with example.
Stores never failed.
Their shield and portion.



Receiving their rebuke,
He withdrew silently.
Alone with the
God of his sheepfold.
Gentle music perhaps.
Refreshment arrives.
Hope against hope
Glowing in his face.
There is nothing
But to follow him.
(Though murder had been
In their hearts.)
He also sorely misses
Wives and loved ones.
“There might yet be victory.
Let us be up and active.”



1 Samuel 30:6 – And David was greatly distressed; for the people spake of stoning him, because the soul of all the people was grieved, every man for his sons and for his daughters: but David encouraged himself in the Lord his God.
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Words 217
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 24, 16, 1

Doug Blair

Doug was once a lawyer. Frustrated. Went broke 1987. Turned to manufacturing. People talked straight. Worked hard. Listened when appropriate. Lead Hand Shipper and Workplace Safety. Married to Hilary 1974. Two kids Lauren and Jordan. Poet. Photographer. Hiker-photographer. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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  • dougb.19255
    Donka, might we always make the Bible an easy and satisfying read. Have you heard of The Message by Eugene Peterson (colloquial paraphrase)? Very good and relaxed. Wayne Blair.
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • donka_k
    Captivating. Wonderful read. Makes the Bible passage easy to understand. Points to God as the Comforter.
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • Teril
    What a poem! Beautiful imagery and storytelling. Bittersweet. This evokes such a sorrow for this leader- all leaders- who must contain the emotional range of the people they lead.
    LikeReply1 year ago

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