Not reluctant to jump in (God)



I couldn’t leave you stranded
I couldn’t close my ears
When you were down there praying
With supplicating tears
I promised yes to raise you
I saw the Saviour’s blood
The time had come to change you
My love just like a flood.
And I have grasped the whole scene
Not hard for me, you know
As Satan tries to cut you
And shake your footings so.
Oh child of mine triumphant
Now speaking through the din
The facts are changing RIGHT NOW
As I am moving in.
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Written on January 27, 2023

Submitted by dougb.21370 on January 27, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEAEAFGEGHIJI
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 454
Words 90
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16

Doug Blair

Doug was once a lawyer. Frustrated. Went broke 1987. Turned to manufacturing. People talked straight. Worked hard. Listened when appropriate. Lead Hand Shipper and Workplace Safety. Married to Hilary 1974. Two kids Lauren and Jordan. Poet. Photographer. Hiker-photographer. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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