You In the Morning



Bluebirds and flowers, butterflies and rainbows
Trees in the autumn, a single red rose
And you in the morning with your eyes closed

A cool summer breeze and long lazy days
A full moon at night that lights the way
And you in the morning with your hair all astray

Our favorite song, our special place
A kiss that lingers, little girls dressed in lace
And you in the morning with a smile on your face

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Inspired by my wife

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Submitted by brentm.18343 on December 01, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAX XBB CCC
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 408
Words 86
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3

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  • Martysull
    It gives an authentic feel of closeness. Good rhythm to the poem.
    LikeReply1 year ago

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