From Jim's Journal



I'm looking for my husband.  He has
disappeared into some place inside
his mind, like a sea creature slides
into a coral bed.

Quick now, here he is for a moment
or an hour.  Like a Robin bobs in
the yard, he is beautiful in his song
before he vanishes into the sky,
flying above or around me.

Are his pieces forever gone? Will
I find a kiss behind my chair meant
for me alone? Will my sorrow erase
the years of love?

I will be brave today.  Tomorrow
I will be the coral he needs. A small
animal in a very large and
strange ocean. .

About this poem

Written after the recent death of my husband

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Written on May 04, 2022

Submitted by caroline121946 on December 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme XXXX XXXXX XXXX XXXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 539
Words 114
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 4, 4

Caroline Shank

I am 75 years old. I have been writing all my life. I live near Milwaukee WI. I have 2 grown children and 4 grandchildren..i worked as a health unit coordinator for twenty years. We moved to Florida for several years and there i was a Bookseller at. Barnes and Noble. more…

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