You!

Samriti 2004 (Haryana)



When you give them all your love
You end up feeling unlovable
When you give them all your attention
You end up being neglected
When you show them all your flaws
You end up felling not worthy
When you expect them to stand by you,
You end up being hurt.

Let's take a moment
And not think about them
Maybe it is about you
Maybe it has always been about you.

Maybe you were too harsh on yourself
Maybe you were the one neglecting you
Maybe you deserved more
But ended up settling for less.

Maybe it is about you
Maybe it has always been !

About this poem

This poem is dedicated to every person who feels like they weren't enough.

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Written on November 14, 2022

Submitted by samritidhamija30 on November 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme xxxxxxax xxAa xaxx Ax
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 537
Words 112
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 8, 4, 4, 2

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