Surrender To The Uncharted



Surrender To The Uncharted


My heart aches every time I think of you,
As crumpled as a rickle of soft wool merely hanging by a thread

Just as one lifeless soul on our precious earth,
I stand with trembling legs and dejected eyes

And a face as warm and pale as the remembrance of dry rays of sunshine,
Quiet like a burning candle with wax dripping down like tears,
From those dreamy yet clueless eyes

I light a fire in my once hopeless soul,
And let the sparks run through my fearless veins,
For I have decided to rise from the ashes of the fire that once burned bright

I stand strong with valour in my heart and mind,
Vulnerability as my strength unguarded by my thoughts, 
For I have decided to surrender to the uncharted

And now, I declare freedom to my restless musings,
As I finally close my eyes to dream of the infinite once again
For I have decided to be unbridled


                  ~Aakanksha Srivastava

About this poem

The focus is on the ability and the decision to fight back and let go of any bad or upsetting memory that makes you uncomfortable, something that has tied your whole life in a knot and hasn't allowed you to be as open and free as you can all your life.

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Written on July 16, 2022

Submitted by aakankshasrivastava30 on November 26, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A XX XB XXB XXX XXA XXX
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 938
Words 185
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 2, 3, 3, 3, 3

Aakanksha Srivastava

Hey dear readers! I'm Aakanksha Srivastava,a second year student pursuing Ba hons Psychology . Writing gives me a means to help people listen to the thoughts, feelings and silent moments I struggle to say out loud, and i think it's beautiful. I'm extremely passionate about writing. And I love to sing and travel. I also like to get creative with photography,painting as well as cooking! more…

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