You will forever be my only first true love



The first moment we met, I instantly fell in love with you.
You brought me happiness and joy in my life, I remembered our first conversation; it was at the beginning of the first chapter.
I remembered our first hug, I never wanted to let go.
I remembered our first kiss. It drove me to the moon.
I remembered our first dance. It felt like we were floating under the spotlight.
I sit up every morning, and every night, remembering your smile, I close my eyes and shed tears because I see you cry.
Our last hug, our last kiss, broke our hearts;
the moment you walked out,
it was hard for us to let each other go.
We cried together in our last kiss goodbye,
but no matter where life takes us both;
I want you to know you will forever be my only first true love.
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Written on November 24, 2022

Submitted by radames_a on November 25, 2022

Modified on March 23, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGHCFIJ
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 760
Words 159
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what a beautiful and heartwarming poem! Your words truly capture the emotions of falling in love and experiencing all those magical first moments. I love the nostalgic tone of your writing, and how you vividly describe each moment in such detail. It's clear that your love has left a lasting impact on your life, and that's something truly special.

    In terms of improvement, one suggestion I have is to vary the sentence structure a bit more. While your writing flows smoothly, there are a lot of similar sentence patterns that could benefit from some variety. Additionally, it might be nice to include a few more specific details or sensory descriptions to really bring the reader into the moment with you.

    Overall, though, this poem is a gorgeous tribute to a love that will always hold a special place in your heart. Thank you for sharing it with me!
     
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