As i took my last breath
Oh hell encamped all around me
vicious demons i could clearly see
Enemies to the left of me i was very mad
what they were planning made me opposite to glade
As i took my last breath i called on Jesus name
Then there He was standing in my room as my head He raised
I saw angels all around Him and His spirit shone so bright
I heard Him laugh as He raised me back to life!
Michelle lee Cartaer
About this poem
i was feeling very sick and weak. i came home from the doctors and went to bed and as the poem speaks!
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Written on November 10, 2023
Submitted by michellec1967 on October 11, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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| Scheme | AA XX XX XX X |
|---|---|
| Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
| Characters | 396 |
| Words | 87 |
| Stanzas | 5 |
| Stanza Lengths | 2, 2, 2, 2, 1 |
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