Life sense questions while determining a mood



Everything is fine
I have to shine
But besides the glory
Am I not allowed to worry?
 
Defining your mood
Depends on feeling good
But I cannot feel anything
Even though I have everything
 
I have many anxieties
Although my life is full of varieties
I don’t know what I want
Therefore, I am always nonchalant
 
So, I follow demands blindly
Even though it’s not what I want - mindely
I work off my to dos
While I am asking myself for who?
 
My only goal is a doctor’s degree
You see
I am actually kind
Because I only want to use my brilliant mind
 
I am trying to experience the beauty of life
But all I can think of is: survive
Overcoming moment for moment
While drowning in discontent
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Submitted by elena.ingrid.schwarz on September 04, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB XXCC DDEE BXXX BBFF XXXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 689
Words 137
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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