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Ansuna haal

Aksh Sharma 2005 (Gurdaspur)

Pta nhi kaisa lag gaya hai Rog..
Sabke samne muskurata,akele mai rota roz....

Kyu meri hassi ke piche chupe gam nhi pehchan paye....
Kyu ankho pe padti jhuriyo ka karan Jan paye.....

Khusi ke moke pe bhi udas mehsus krta hoon......
Sabke bich reh kar bhi akela mehsus krta hoon....

Itna kamzor nhi ke khudkhusi krlu......
Lekin itna khush bhi nhi jine ki khawish rakhlu.....

Kahi bhi nhi lagta ab mera man....
Raat ko kha jata h aklapan....

Kitna kuch kehna h lekin koi milta hi nhi....
Overdramatic keh ke aisi baatein koi sunta nhi....

Bolne walo ke to muh hilte hai,
Isilye sabko batane se drta hai....
Ap kya jano voh roz kitni mote marta hai...

Apne dukh bechara kisi ko bta na saka..
Apne halat kisi ko samza na saka...

Thak kr ik din khamosh let gaya bistar pe....
Jawab nhi de rha h jo log utha  rhe sawal uspe...

Puchoge nhi kyu.....

Mar gaya na.....

Ik guzarish h ap sabse

Agar koi mile udas akela zarurat ho kisiki jise.....
Samazhkar halat uske pls bacha Lena use....

About this poem

This is a hindi poetry explaining the state of mind of a depressed person and it's consequences.

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Written on September 25, 2022

Submitted by akshsharma2005 on September 25, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AB CC DD EE XD FF FFF AA GG X X B BX
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 991
Words 214
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 3, 2, 2, 1, 1, 1, 2
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Aksh Sharma

My name is Aksh and I am currently in class 11th, I mostly write about heartbreaks, losses, sad state of mind etc..... more…

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