Your eyes

Bkayy 2005 (Pretoria)



Im glad my first love was you
Dont get misled by the "was" because i know in my heart this love will be forever
Your beauty in my eyes will forever surpass that of every woman my eyes meet
If i were to decribe it.....
I'd say your face reminds me of orchids in summer,how they bloom to perfection even in the rain
,How your eyes sparkle like polished marble and tell tall tales
The timeless tales that taught me to have patience
Tales that lead to where you bury your pain
To where you plant your love and let it bloom in total darkness
The same love that breeds leafs
Leafs that narrate
Our chemistry as infinite at its best


The river of my past and future set their course in motion
They flowed through you

I see all that in just your eyes

About this poem

It describes her beauty in my eyes

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Written on July 04, 2022

Submitted by Bkay on August 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXXXBXXBXXXX XA X
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 747
Words 153
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 12, 2, 1

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