As Long As I Breath



I only live for you,
Breath for your sake my love,
When I inhale your presence,
My heart rejoice with lots of love,

My feelings you revived,
Rekindled the light in my ever silent heart,
Heart cold and deserted,
You gave it a glimmer of hope for life,

My beautiful love Jamila,
You make me believe true love exists still,
You make me feel alive with this priceless thrill,
It's you my heart I give, use it upto your heart's fill.

I thank God I was blessed to have you,
For my life itself is empty without you my love,
A beauty of face and heart,
A treasure I'll cherish as long as I breath.
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Written on August 17, 2022

Submitted by JayCrown on August 16, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABXB XCXX XDDD ABCX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 593
Words 133
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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