Eternal



I was lost in the sea,hugging all those waves tightly
Collecting all the drops and keeping it for the mighty ocean
Let me control the ship  captain,but I don't know the direction
Guide me to it and pass me the control,I will learn from you

I can hear thousand breaths coming one after another
Knocking my door to find millions of solutions,hmm
Let me open the door and solve one by one,for God's sake
But they are limitless,they are infinite like universal set

I could hear you all,my room can carry you all
But they can't see you all because you all brought darkness
Each one of you have darkness and it is spreading to me
My door is open now and i can leave with some of you

I want to dance with the rhythm of my mind,a silent one
But they will see,its ok but I need my space,my music
Moving hands slowly with my legs,eyes closed,very silent
Melting into the silence,creating my new calm partner

I am standing infront of the door, the door to my silence
Want to knock but it will remember me and will open magically
Door is opening slowly and i can see the light, hear the silence
I am walking to it and now I know am the queen of eternal

About this poem

It is about never ending life's path. I am trying to conquer silence .

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Written on September 04, 2022

Submitted by navamipradeep016 on September 04, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABBC DXXX XXAC BXXD EAEX
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,150
Words 241
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Navami Pradeep

I am from India. Now am preparing for neet . I like to recite poems and I share my mind in my poems. more…

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