Flicked dream

Susmita Nayak 2004 (Bhadrak)



I just wanna run in a field of daffodils,
Skate in a iceberg with the seals.
The forest is full of greeny adventures,
And I am happy with my friendly creatures.
Skipping and jumping to the mighty space with Neptune want to run a race.
The big red sparkly crab is my horse,
In this grace full ocean I am the boss.
Those creepy grapse are my juice box ,
And today's spy is the cunning fox.
Dark clouds are my heavenly bed,
Everybody's my friend and nobody's maid.
My world was so much euphoric,
And the dream is broken with a flick.

About this poem

This poem is about a dream of a person,whose inner child had woken up in the dream ,a carefree world of fairytale,but had to let go of the so captivating dream due to a sudden Jult of their present depressed self.

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Written on July 21, 2022

Submitted by nayaksusmita2005 on July 20, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABCCDEFGGHIJJ
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 530
Words 114
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13

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