A Journey To Heaven

Rosemarie 1957 (Baytown)



I had a vision in my mind I'm flying
through the sky up toward heaven

Where I see Jesus standing so high
It was the most beautiful sight to see
Jesus standing there reaching out for me.

I moved toward him holding his hands
I said Jesus I had to come I hope you understand
Just because I wanted to hold your hands.

It was like he was waiting for me
I had to go I had to see

The feeling of warmth through his hands
I felt so much love that would never end

He shined with a glow in his long white robe
I said  Jesus it's time to go

I will be back when ever it's my time
Where I can be with you forever in my mind

I move back to where I was  and, brought
back with me this ever ending love.

About this poem

This was a dream I had that was so real. I just had to express it.

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Written on July 07, 2022

Submitted by rwise286 on July 08, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XX XAA BXB AA BX XX XX XX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 694
Words 157
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 3, 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2

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  • rwise286
    We live here in a world of evilness. More evilness than love. My hardships and struggles is what brought me closer to God. I don't know what I would have done without him.. He has done many miracles in my life and, how I'am so
    blessed. It's a mazing feeling to know him and, his word which I'm still learning not believing in God is because they can't see him.

    What the old saying is believing is not seeing but, seeing is believing. I have always had a open mind. What I'm trying to say here we are living in the end of times and, we have to rebuke the devil when he get's in our minds that's how he takes control that's when our minds become weak. God loves us all we are his children just stay close to him and, get to know him but, we have to meet him halfway.
    God Bless All!
     
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