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You

Kierstyn C 2005

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I guess I never thought I would fall in love that fast.
When you met me, I was the girl with the fake and broken smile.
The one who laughed, just so everyone would think I was happy.
The one who kept every single broken piece bottled up.
The one that helped everyone else out, but didn’t seem to help herself.
The one that always got asked, why I was so happy but in the inside I felt like dying.
I was the girl who danced in the rain and the girl who smiled in the dark.
Than I met you…

About this poem

This poem is about a girl that experienced a shattering heartbreak that left her feeling alone and incapable of love.

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Written on June 01, 2022

Submitted by Kierstyncox472 on June 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEFGH
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 493
Words 108
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
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