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Admiring your beauty!!

Derrick Hooker 1978 (Dallas Texas)

May 22 
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“Admiring your beauty’

It is good to see your beautiful face in this particular time and place to acknowledge, admire and desire your overwhelming beauty. You have smooth brown curly hair full tender lips and round and curvy hips. You are beautiful yet petite sly and discreet with that sweet smell of perfume you wear it is intoxicating. It is great to see your face in this particular time to place, eye to eye face to face and soul to soul. So why not give me a shot I’m a great friend and would be an even better companion. I’m confident not conceded strong and not domineering charming and not manipulative.

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This poem describes how I approached my girlfriend.

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Written on March 12, 2012

Submitted by Dhook78 on May 07, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Characters 622
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Stanzas 2
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