Yur telling me.



It hard to let go yu say, your telling me, i cant describe the pain im my chest, without yu its hard to breath, i filled bucket with tears from crying, how much i miss yu there is no way to measure, i miss yur smile yur  body yur laughter. yu cant imagine what this feel like, yu never truly loved i see it in yur eyes. I would do anything tell me what, pay any cost there no price to high. i would trade places with yu in hell just so yu wont suffer, give my life with out  thought or pause in the blink of and eye! There is no river i wont cross, no ocean i wouldnt swim no forest i wouldnt trail no desert i wouldnt walk, no jungle day or night, i would climb ther is no mountain to high. Without yu next to me i wont sleep at night. Dont yu see yu and i are ment to be. there is no one i want, no other for me. yur my love my life my destiny. to be with yu is it, there is not
 next for me. yur all i want desire and need. what must i do to show yu, there nothing i wouldnt do, to have yu with me to look in yur eyes and love yu the rest of my life.To letgo is no option of mine.i wont give up not ever i will keep trying. i love i love my spirit is crying.

About this poem

Its something i wrote becuase how i feel for my wife.

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Written on April 24, 2022

Submitted by gilbertortega164 on April 24, 2022

Modified on April 18, 2023

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