Your turn



                   Your Turn
As I walked a fiery Autumn road,
   I all but missed the maples bleeding red,
Willows weeping leaves now tinged and yellowed,
   a Pollack canvas, titled “Summer’s fled.”

Tumbling rainbows barely brushed my eyes,
    and leaves rushed by in colors with no mane.
I stared senseless at the fall-bright skies,
    Fall present...past, sometimes to me the same.

But, then, I turned and you were by my side,
    your eyes intense and taking all this in.
For all these years, my teacher and my guide
    in picking out the colors as they spin.

In turn, you help a color-blind man see.
    Now take my hand and name new hues for me.

About this poem

I have written six traditional sonnets over the years. I feel that I have a good sense of form married to sense

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Written on December 20, 2020

Submitted by Mickev00 on April 06, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XABAB CXCX DEDE FF
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 664
Words 128
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 2

Kevin Dineen

I am always a teacher. I spent over fifty years in classrooms from secondary to graduate. Poetry is more than an avocation for me. It’s my life work more…

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  • POEBLSNG
    Sometimes what's right in front of us to see, we may miss; until someone points it out to us. Guidance can go a long way.
    LikeReply1 year ago

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