Eclipse
He took her on a voyage,
To see the sun and stars,
Her love bleeds bright,
Behind his shimmering bars,
There’s a glowing galaxy,
Dancing in her eyes,
But now it dares to dim,
Stardust falling when she cries,
He has eclipsed her wretched mind,
Flying her blind into his night,
He has unfurled his wings,
And snuffed out all her light.
About this poem
A poem about the ache of an unhealthy relationship.
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Written on March 21, 2022
Submitted by ymadison835 on March 31, 2022
Modified on April 18, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | ABCBDEFEGCHC |
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Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 336 |
Words | 73 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 12 |
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