The Unnoticed Star

John Rendel E. Pateña 2000 (Rizal)



And I'm like a star,
Sometimes you cannot see me,
But I'm always there.

About this poem

This is haiku - a short poetry originated in Japan. I choose this form because of its suggestiveness and simplicity. I wrote this as a reply/continuation of the haiku made by my friend, a very special friend. This is to express my feelings for her but I don't want her to notice! I don't have the guts.. :)

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Written on January 11, 2022

Submitted by rendelpatena78 on January 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABC
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 71
Words 16
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 3

John Rendel E. Pateña

Birthday: October 10, 2000 Address: Rizal, Philippines Email: rendelpatena78@gmail.com more…

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