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Heartbreak

Patrick Vedral 2008 (New Jersey)

Heartbreak

As my heartaches
Falls apart and breaks
I feel at peace
My emotions cease
I exist in solitary
Forever wary
Of things to haunt me
As I nestle into a fir tree
I felt broken
I felt stolen
By the girl who
Whisked my heart askew
As I stare into my despair
I tell you beware
Of the heartbroken world
That is worse than the underworld
Endless darkness
Endless starkness
Nothing to feel
Nothing to conceal
That nothing is worse
Then the broken heart curse
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Written on January 01, 2022

Submitted by vedral591 on January 10, 2022

Modified on April 25, 2023

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Scheme AAAABBBBCCDDEEFFAAGGAA
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 460
Words 87
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 22
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