Angel who fell



If the sky breaks will You be there
Catch us when we fall because You care
Once we were angels and now were fallen
Like children we still hear Father callin

Humans are not greater but You love them more
Forgiven for every mistake yet only one we made
Our fate is a furnace of unending pain
Unrelenting Father Your mercy can we gain?

We are ten we are nine
Whats the benefit if we are denied
Possessing children at birth secrets we never share
We do what we can it just doesnt seem fair

How we can lose it all through one dare
To disobey we lost all of our chairs
Tumbled down to earth deceiving truths with air
This eternal fate how can anyone truly bare

Yea we sinned we didnt care
We fell took a ship Lucifer steered
Thought he was the leader down to hell we followed
For this we failed no god no other
But the one Father we presume
Still we sacrificed everything to win that fight
But it was just one battle and now its over

Here we lie lost and madder
Eat the fruit itll make you badder
Less you know the truth turn your foot
Go the other way and follow not the snake
Otherwise be consumed with fear and hate
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Written on January 21, 2022

Submitted by David1290 on January 21, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB XXCC XXAA AXAA AXXDXXD DAXXX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,117
Words 226
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 7, 5

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