I look into her eyes



I look into her eyes
I see a black sea of reflection
Of countless rain drop
Pouring down from the sky
Into the deep infinite ocean wave
Filled with a mother’s grief display
Of a son’s loss.
like losing her own body limb
drowning in the verge of despair
submerging of own inner voice
With a heavily bleeding of a heartache
And a burden agony weight
Is day or night?
Is right or wrong?
Is life or death?
No words are forming
From her lips
I look into her eyes
I see an excruciating terrify
Like needle shoot through the vein
That put her into life death sentence
To an end
with unbearable intake
incapable to fight
with no other strength  
to stay survive
I look into her eyes
And I feel deeply for her pain
And shattered dream
In a vulnerable term
Her story reflects of mine
As I have walked in her shoes
       And live through the past
To understand the
   Meaning
        Of
       Life

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A reflection of a mother 's emotional feelings to her son's loss.

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Written on January 02, 2022

Submitted by Hon on January 02, 2022

Modified by Hon on January 02, 2022

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Stanza Lengths 37

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