A Consolation Message From the Departed



COUNSELOR:

Do not fret and blindly stare
as if your life has suddenly come
to a halt,
thinking too much…
and even wondering
whether in some unknown manner,
it is your fault.

Life certainly has its ups and downs.
The road is always curving, never straight.
Your task while here…
is simply not to scowl or frown.
Just keep on smiling, friends…
before it is too late and, while waiting,
make your just  amends.

THE DEPARTED ONE:

And as for me, your friend,
your lifetime partner,
who once walked this earth
in tandem, right beside you,
I’ve moved to somewhere else,
to greener pastures…
My everlasting place of berth.

So, do not sit and mope
at what you fear is my demise.
Do not think there is no hope,
or whine, or pine, or close your eyes.
For, ever shining like the sun,
You and I, and everyone else,
again shall surely rise.

About this poem

Just as the sun sets, but eternally rises, so must all of us, living under the sun, rejoice and be satisfied that the dark shadows of our lives can be overcome by the brightness in our hearts.

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Written on December 27, 2021

Submitted by karlcfolkes on December 27, 2021

Modified by karlcfolkes on June 23, 2022

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Scheme XXAXBCA XXXXDBD E XCFXGXF HIHIEGI
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 844
Words 180
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 7, 7, 1, 7, 7

Karl Constantine FOLKES

Retired educator of Jamaican ancestry with a lifelong interest in composing poetry dealing particularly with the metaphysics of self-reflection; completed a dissertation in Children’s Literature in 1991 at New York University entitled: An Analysis of Wilhelm Grimm’s “Dear Mili” Employing Von Franzian Methodological Processes of Analytical Psychology. The subject of the dissertation concerned the process of Individuation. more…

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