A Question and Wish from God.



Suddenly, asked a wish from God,
The next moment, came true,

Decades take place,
While wishing and wishing,
Nothing can be fulfilled,
One after one wishing,
Offers and prayers,
Never ends.........

If the wish is not fulfilled,
Why we ask again
To thy..........
Who is complementary,
The great soul,
If not he, then who?

Suddenly, wishes starts meeting,
Whatever wish, seems to happen,
Like wonder seems to happen,
But, we forget the God,
Who is complementary,

And, when we go to his court,
He reminds..........
Then we pay our thanks,
Prayers and offers
With another wish,

God gives and forgets,
But never forgets us............

' Forget anything, never forget the God,
  Who has showered us, kind heart, mind broad...........

About this poem

Normally we ask some wish and wait for fulfilling. With this some more wishes are also added. Some are fulfilled and some not, but why? Because we forget the God to pay our Thanks and offers.

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Submitted by brijmohan_p on August 12, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ab xcdcxx dxxExb cffaE xxxxx xx ax
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 699
Words 119
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 6, 6, 5, 5, 2, 2

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For writing this poem, I have got inspiration from manner less people, Though I can't teach them, but decided to write in this subject. First half was written and the rest half took long time. I am happy to do something in this way and show a path this way. more…

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