ashamed palms



Staying with, I shall be,
You cannot, Wont stay here by me,
Breathing in, Just to know, 
when I am, To get back
you shall not do the same
as you tell them of your shame
Tell them, Don't impede,
As they plead for the spot they stand,
Let them rot in your hands,
All of regret, If naught left.
stolen by the same if not theft.

About this poem

This poem is all metaphors about what drugs can do to you if you believe that they will help and a toxic relationship that ended up with cheating. Its not my best work but it is the first time eve tried this subject.

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Written on July 21, 2021

Submitted by christiann20209426 on July 21, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Stanzas 1
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