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You'll Feel Much Better

EdwinRayTanguma 1966 (California)

You'll Feel Much Better

I went for a walk
Along the shore
I first took three steps
Then took some more

The wind blew gently
Upon my cheek
And the vast ocean
Made me feel meek

Before I knew it
I'd walked a mile
I thought about it
It made me smile

You should go outside
And take a stroll
You'll feel much better
So will your soul

Edwin Tanguma   6/22/2021

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Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on June 22, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme A xbxb xcxc dede xfAf x
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 339
Words 71
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
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