Dilemma



He stands frozen in my memory,
one foot in the drifting boat
and one foot on the dock
with his balance lying in between.
With only a second to decide
his commitment:  to the dock
or the seaward moving boat.
I didn’t notice earlier
just where he had been,
if he was coming onto land
or going out to sea.
I saw only his dilemma
without knowing his desire,
but it was clear to me
the ocean would soon claim him
if he failed to quickly act.

About this poem

simple observation becomes electric

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Written on 1998

Submitted by Snodeel on June 04, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDECBFGHAIFAJK
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 424
Words 87
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16

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