Analysis of Miss You Mom

Amber Shay Allen 1991 (Martinsvilee)



I think about you
All the time so much
Has happen in my life
I'm not sure how hard to try

The sweet smell of your
Perfume has slowly faded
Away but all your helpful
Teaching are always to stay

I can't express how much
You taught me so much
I can't remember never
Once heard you complain

So much hearts were
Broken the day God
Called you home it
Seems through each
One of us were left
To survive alone

I know there was a reason
That you had to leave
Keep us in your watchful eyes
So now in God I really
Do believe more


Scheme XAXX BXXX AACX CXXXXX XXXXB
Poetic Form
Metre 11011 10111 110011 1111111 01111 0111010 0111110 101111 110111 11111 1101010 11101 1110 10011 1111 111 11101 10101 1111010 11111 1101101 1101110 1011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 496
Words 107
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 6, 5
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 82
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Amber Shay Allen

I am 29, get ready to turn 30 on May 20th. I have lost both of my parents due to cancer, lost my grandparents that was looking after me since my mom pass away. I been living with some of my church family since 2013. they are my family. I love going to church, love animals. I have 2 dogs and 3 cats. more…

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