Analysis of Can I make a deal with God?



Can I make a deal with God?
Rushing wind to cut my hair
Crossroads stolen, dreams unclear
Could you kill me from the start?

Meant to live the whole life trying
To define my place and worth
If I'm feeble — please stop lying -
Give me death so soft as birth.


Scheme XXXX ABAB
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 1110111 1011111 110101 1111101 11101110 1011101 11101110 1111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 251
Words 52
Sentences 3
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 99
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted by OneVerseADayAndDoctorGoesAway on May 03, 2021

Modified by OneVerseADayAndDoctorGoesAway on May 03, 2021

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