Analysis of Me vs Me

Manok Lual 2024 (Jacksonville)



It’s me vs me where the only battle is within me
It’s me vs me, will I win and become free
Or will I fold and become weak
It’s me vs me knowing that the right me will get me where I need to be
But yet I still choose me and wonder when I’ll ever be free from that wrong me
But I’m here stuck learning how to finally release the present me
It’s me vs me, God gave me the biggest challenge of them all but I won’t fall to the wrong me but for now
It’s me vs me


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Poetic Form
Metre 111011010101011 111011110011 11110011 1110110101111111111 1111110101110111111 11111011100010101 111011110101011111111011111 11101
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 472
Words 102
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 43
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 346
Words per stanza (avg) 102
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Submitted by poetnok2 on May 03, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Manok Lual

I’m actually a 6’9 basketball player trying to become the best player to ever play this game. This is actually my first time posting one of my poem and wanted to try something different. I’ve been to myself a lot cause I’ve been so focus on reaching a dream but it’s a battle within me that can make or break me this is why I’ve made this poem “Me vs Me”. I would never thought I’ll be making a poem lol. more…

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