Analysis of Attitudes shape up the direction of life



Attitudes shape up the direction of life
If it is in you, it will change your life.
Otherwise, you're a loser no one admires
Be wise, change yourself as time desires

If thoughts are positive your aims are high
So don't be shy open up your inner eyes
When you're there with insight, don't cry
Give it a big hug with a smile and shay "Hi"

Change of attitudes make your aims high
You feel great; not you others' feel shy
You go through it successfully with light
Feel effects of it in; ready to go sky high

By changing it you get peace & spirit is high
You feel happy your ambitions are sky high
You are appreciated all around you feel shy
Makes you feel proud U look at sky & say Hi

It comes in with the maturity of life to thrive
It blessed on those who are positive in life
Being a 'Golden Bird' with you forever in life
It's a big achievement of a lifetime in your life


Scheme AAXX BXBB BBXB BBBB XAAA
Poetic Form Quatrain  (40%)
Metre 1011001011 1110111111 1010101101 1110111010 1111001111 11111011101 1111111 11011101011 11101111 111111011 1111010011 101110101111 11011111011 11101010111 110100101111 1111111111 1101001001111 11111110001 1001011101001 101010101011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 878
Words 175
Sentences 2
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 138
Words per stanza (avg) 35
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Submitted by Amirul on May 03, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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