Analysis of Are living with all freedom but still are in prison cage



Are living with all freedom but still are in prison cage

Though it is an advanced age, but I call it a dark age
We are proving wrong what is written on ethical page
Are living with all freedom but still are in prison cage
Can’t see anywhere crystal clear human beings image

Why are doing that, and what are we getting out of that?
I can’t see anything around, of which we can feel great
I feel we are wrong but how to correct our ugly image
Need to start a forceful campaign to change that page

But still no one heed to a call given to come out of that
Everybody is enjoying life, for the intellectuals’ regret
I’m concerned as have seen in them a behavioral change
Hope some of you would be considering helping in that

Want some intellectuals to knock at their intellect’s gate
Prior it’s too late, want to take dire steps them to correct
It’s a podium everyone to feel at home, a little to suggest
I see fervor in them, started calling me how they can help

It’s a hopeful sign of survival to carry on job on high note
There are a lot of groups want to change image to be great
I’m glad, are ready to help in adverse situation not to be late
It surprised me after seeing this much keenness, I can't narrate!


Scheme A aaAb cdba cxxc dxxx xddd
Poetic Form
Metre 11011101110101 11110111111011 11101111011001 11011101110101 1110101101010 11101011110111 1111001111111 1111111101101010 111010011111 111111011011111 1001010110010001 10111101001001 11111101001001 1101001111101 10111111111101 10100101111010101 111001101011111 10101101011011111 11011111110111 11110110010101111 10111010111111
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,206
Words 235
Sentences 2
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 45
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 159
Words per stanza (avg) 39
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Submitted by Amirul on May 03, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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