Analysis of looking for you

Fahad Al Jamea 1978 (Bahrain)



The one who has a taste,
Of beauty and haste,
No moment with you is waste,
For I acknowledged how we are based,
Where love never come late,
Embracing the path of fate,
With acceptance in mind and state,

I adore you much,
Little more and a bunch,
Tethering my hole with a hunch,

As I shiver in my own clay,
The child within wants to play,
Seems many matters to obey,
Can hold some delay,
With you I want to stay,

Share my wander,
A place that is kinder,
Where you become the finder,
And both of us surrender,
Right after the moment of thunder,
The singing rain we are under,
Forgetting the meaning of plunder,
Finding peace as we hinder,

With you I speak the truth,
We smile and sooth,
Fit each other in a booth,

The world would seem,
Large pouring on a stream,
Of memories in a dream,
You know, we are a team,


Scheme AAAABBB XCC DDDDD EEEEEEEE FFF GGGG
Poetic Form Etheree  (40%)
Metre 011101 11001 1101111 110101111 111011 0100111 10100101 10111 101001 111101 11100111 0101111 11010101 11101 111111 1110 011110 1101010 0111010 110010110 01011110 010010110 1011110 111101 1101 1110001 0111 110101 1100001 111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 780
Words 158
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 7, 3, 5, 8, 3, 4
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 104
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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