Analysis of Stalagmite



while his rock headstrongly defied
the hails and hurricanes
he was torn by the unheard rains
of the tears he kept confined  

his gems dripped down in grief
to dark and misty oceans
hiding in the commonness
of fears and felt distress  

on the surface sometimes shines
the gleam of untamed light
a stony blue sky then strongly denies
the eternity of this night


Scheme XAAX XXAX XBXB
Poetic Form Quatrain  (33%)
Metre 111101 01010 11110011 1011101 111101 1101010 10001 110101 1010011 01111 0101111001 00100111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 347
Words 64
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 97
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Modified by ludy_b on May 02, 2021

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Ludy Bührs

The topics she writes about are very diverse, so are the poetry styles she applies. As a Dutch translator and poet, having lived in Cambodia's capital city Phnom Penh for 2.5 years, in 2008 she published "Op de ruïnes van een rijk" (On the Ruins of an Empire) ISBN 978-90-8834-483-1 with 60 poems based on her experiences there. In 2007 she received a Certificate of Accomplishment as one of The Best Poems and Poets of 2007 issued by poetry.com and the International Library of Poetry for her poem Choked Truth, her own translation of "Verstikte waarheid", one of the poems in the book. Born in 1956, she still works as an independent translator, translating from English into Dutch. more…

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