Analysis of Breached Land



Minerals I born
forest I laid
waters I baths
Spokes from age's
from same mother We born
with my black
How sweet home.

After the pleasure!
As they converted
Corruption means for days
Selfishness dresses young
Hardworking valueless than money
turn the land
How can a cat copies the way of mouse?
Smocks fights the white suit
under the brain
Riches and valuable cultures
no where to found
How much black be
With all doings.
We insult the God who made Us black.


Scheme AXXXABX XXXXCXXXXXXCXB
Poetic Form
Metre 10011 1011 1011 1110 111011 111 111 10010 11010 010111 100101 10100110 101 1101100111 11011 1001 10010010 1111 1111 1110 101011111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 438
Words 83
Sentences 5
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 7, 14
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 185
Words per stanza (avg) 42
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Submitted by Asante on April 28, 2021

Modified by Asante on April 28, 2021

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Asante Fianko Isaac Snr

Asante Isaac with the pen name Asante Fianko Isaac Snr was born at St Dominic Hospital, in Akwatia.Ghana. He came out with writing experience from Kwaobaah Nyanoa Senior High School. He started writing at the age 15 years. more…

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