Analysis of A Time When You Were Mine
Patti Woosley 1957 (WV)
A TIME WHEN YOU WERE MINE
We had our favorite love song.
Pretty words that sound so right.
I play it over and over - late into the night.
I play it to remind me
when you were by my side,
and we slept so close together
and held each other tight.
But it’s only an old love song.
A love song isn’t real.
A love song will never hold me.
A love song cannot feel.
It just hangs around in my memories,
reminding me of the time;
a time when you still loved me,
a time when you were mine.
There’s a picture on my nightstand,
close beside my bed.
I carry it around with me
all day long inside my head.
Your smile says you were happy.
Your eyes say you were true.
Your lips seem like they are whispering,
“Oh how much I love you.”
But it’s only an old picture.
And I know it isn’t real.
It’s a picture that can’t hold me;
a picture that cannot feel.
It just hangs around in my memories,
reminding me of the time;
a time when you still loved me,
a time when you were mine.
I have a box of your love letters,
hidden on the highest shelf.
I can’t bear to read them,
so I hide them from myself.
Sweet words of love you wrote to me.
You sealed each one with a kiss.
These old love letters remind me
of all the things I miss.
I’ll keep hanging on to these old souvenirs,
knowing none of them are real;
They're just things that will never hold me.
Things that cannot feel.
And although you’re no longer with me,
I still think about the time.
The time when you once loved me.
A time when you were mine.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 011101 111010011 1011111 1111001010101 1111011 110111 01111010 011101 11101111 01111 01111011 011101 1110101100 0101101 0111111 011101 1010111 10111 11010111 1110111 1111010 111101 111111100 111111 11101110 011111 10101111 0101101 1110101100 0101101 0111111 011101 110111110 1010101 111111 111111 11111111 1111101 11110011 110111 1110111101 1011111 111111011 11101 01111011 1110101 0111111 011101 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,495 |
Words | 302 |
Sentences | 28 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 7, 8, 8, 8, 8, 8 |
Lines Amount | 48 |
Letters per line (avg) | 23 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 161 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 43 |
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