Analysis of To Come Up For Air



I’m a leaf stuck against a rock
drowning in the river
Water is rushing past me,
pushing me tightly to the stone
How can I escape?
When will the water slow?
I see the leaves and sticks flowing past me
When will it be my turn?
As I wait, I drown...


Scheme ABCDEFCGH
Poetic Form Nonet (33%)
Metre 10110101 100010 1011011 10110101 11101 110101 1101011011 111111 11111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 243
Words 51
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 187
Words per stanza (avg) 51
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Submitted on April 20, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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