Analysis of Bring Me Your Pain



I have crossed the waters of time
I have sailed upon newborn skies
I have seen, I have touched, I have tasted
I have searched, I have loved, I have lost

So bring me your pain and your hurt
Lay it before me like silken sashes at a Persian Bazaar
Tell me every intricate detail like describing their elegant prints

Pour your agony and anguish over me
Decant your port into my soul so I may consume it
Empty your flagon of wine so I may destroy all trace of it

Unclasp your burdens from around your velvetine neck
Place them in my hand like a bejeweled necklace so I may feel the heat of your body within it's gold
Let it slowly deliquesce into my being


Scheme XXXX XXX XAA XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11101011 11101101 1111111110 111111111 11111011 1101111010101001 1110010001101011001 11100010101 01110111111011 101111111011111 1110101111 110111011011110111100111 1110101110
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 638
Words 127
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 130
Words per stanza (avg) 32
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Submitted by M.Useless on April 14, 2021

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