Analysis of Talash thi sukun ki aur mujhe Tum mil Gaye

Priyanshi mishra 2003 (Ghaziabad)



Mera Ishq mukammal jab hua jb mujhe tum mil gye
Talash   sukun ki thi aur mujhe Tum mil Gaye
Darti thi ghabrati thi bechain ho jati thi
Lakh bar khud ko smjhati thi
Khud ko smjha smjha m khud hi thak jati thi
Or jab bari tumse baat karne ki ati thi
Tumko dekh m sharm se laal ho jati thi

Lekin himmat kar uss sham tumse bola
Apne dil  ka raz tumse  khol
Or jb tum pass ake mere kano m bole ye phele  kyu nhi bola
Mano sase tham si gyi thi waqt ruk sa gya tha khushiya uchal uchal chere per ane ko tyar thi or ho bhi kyu na akhir mera Ishq mukammal hua jo mujhe Tum mile gye
 talaash sukun ki thi or mujhe Tum mile gye
Tum mile har khushi mil gayi
Lagta hai ki dusri zindgi mil
Zindgi m jise sukun ki talaash thi tumhare anse vo puri ho gyi .....
Mera Ishq mukammal jab hua jb mujhe tum mil gye
Talash  sukun ki thi aur mujhe Tum mil Gaye


Scheme Aabbbbb cccaaaxaAa
Poetic Form
Metre 11111011111 111111111 11111111 111111 1111111111 1110111111 111111111 1111111110 111111 1111111011111110 1011111111111111111111111111111011111 111111111 111111 111111 11111111111011 11111011111 111111111
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 831
Words 176
Sentences 2
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 7, 10
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 325
Words per stanza (avg) 92
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Submitted on April 09, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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