Analysis of Ode to a Mountain Bike



Once I rode with earbuds in,
climbing fast and free.
Down I fell, removing skin,
why happen to me?

I know my bike, I know my bod,
also know I pain.
Why do I ride upon my rod
know’n I’ll fall again?

Back in the saddle do I go
crashes will not win!
Amid the turn, scree, oh no!
Down I go again.

© Criss F. Rosenlof 5/10/2013
- I am into cycling, and an author of a blog I readwrote about a nasty set of falls he had on a rideearlier that day. In response to that, I wrote this poem and sent it to him to cheer him up.


Scheme ABAB CXCD EAED XX
Poetic Form
Metre 111110 10101 1110101 11011 11111111 10111 11110111 11101 10010111 10111 0101111 11101 111 11011000110101110101011111101110011111110011111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 517
Words 111
Sentences 10
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 95
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Modified on April 12, 2023

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Criss F Rosenlof

Criss has been writing poetry since a "Reflections" contest in the second grade. He has been married for over 30 years as of this writing, and has 4 children, and 8 grandchildren. more…

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