Analysis of Comforting God



When dilemmas arise , in the life that I live
I look to the heaven's , and know I should give ...

The sorrows I feel , as I now walk the earth
That were given to me , since inception of birth

To the Creator of man , and the gifts that are found
I will lift up my Spirit , and the troubles around ...

And find consolation , from the God that I serve
And hope for the hope , that I do not deserve

He will give me the peace , if I only accept
That His Son was the one , who took my neglect ...

And bore it with Him , while committing His life
To my soul that forever , is relieved of the strife


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Metre 101001001111 11101001111 01011111101 101011101011 1001011001111 1111110001001 01010101111 01101111101 111101111001 11110111101 01111101011 1111010101101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 611
Words 121
Sentences 4
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 73
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted by TommyD on March 29, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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