Analysis of The Sun



It's beaming light , makes my skin not so pale
Increasing the warmth , in the air I inhale

It is bringing light , to a world that seems dark
Finding no fault , a continuous arc

The sun is a star , in the center of mass
With millions of  tons, of hydrogen gas

Our sun is the source , of light and of heat
We invite it to parties , with the friends that we meet

It likes drying our clothes , and it scorches the earth
With bold deity , since inception of birth

The sun is a G-type , not sure what that means
It's known to bring brightness , and turn the grass green

The brightest of  objects , that ever is found
Brings joy to the earth , while it blesses it's ground

Hellos and Sol , has been used and called sun
While quoted in Scripture , since time has begun

The earth cannot live , without it's sweet smile
The moon can't reflect , if it's gone for awhile

I'm finding it hard , to believe in the fact
That the sun was exploded , and then it came back ...

To now come and show us , that it has a plan
To spin on it's axis , not divesting in man

I now thank my God , He created this star
And allows me to gaze , at it's grace , from afar

TommyD  3/22/21


Scheme AA BB CC DD EE XX FF GG HH XX II JJ D
Poetic Form
Metre 1101111111 01001001101 11101101111 1011001001 01101001011 1101111001 10110111011 1011110101111 111010101101 11100101011 01101111111 11111001011 01011011011 11101111011 101111011 11001011101 0110101111 01101111101 11011101001 101101001111 11101111101 111110101001 11111101011 001111111101 1
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,139
Words 222
Sentences 2
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 67
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted by TommyD on March 22, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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TommyD

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